Wednesday, March 21, 2007

You and I

You led the way
Never asked why

Blindfolded I walked
Never asked why

Stumbled over rocks
Never asked why

Saw through your eyes
Never asked why

Struggled to match
Never asked why

You drew the lines
Never asked why

Did as you said
Never asked why

Now, when I yearn to fly
Why do you ask why?

6 comments:

Aur Batao said...

niceeeee......makes total sense....

Anonymous said...

lol..i some how cannot help but put it in context of our conversation today!

makes a lot of sense.. :) keep it up my poetess

Pratima Khadke said...

very nice..totally agree to u.
nitiben ..tu changal lihite
keep it up..

]\[ ][ '][' ][ said...

thanx guys...
thot it made sense only to me...everyone has their own interpretations i c :)
appu now that u say it..yea...it makes sense in todays context also..hehe

Timber Da Wolf said...

Written .. Very well indeed..

Fräulein N. Phos Mousou said...

Aw,this is so good!

May I suggest something? :)
Add tags to all your poetry posts (name them "poetry" or... well whatever you like, haha) and add a tag widget on the sidebar, so your poems can be more easily found :D

They are so worth reading, keep it up!